Pitfall: Plots, Not People.

One of my own most frequent pitfalls as a writer is writing about plots, instead of people. Anyone can write a plot, someone going from point A all the way to point N with a climax, falling action and untying of the knot. What takes talent, and what should end up in the hands of publishing houses, book shelves, and NYT Best Selling lists are stories about the individual and the fight within themselves.

I recently finished, well, sort of finished, two “thriller” novels. One was a thriller romance by Karen Harper and another was a government conspiracy thriller by Greg Iles. Both stories were well researched, but halfway through both books, I skipped to the ending, not because I wanted to know what was going to happen next, but because there was nothing within the pages that changed the Characters. Both books were written about plots, which were very interesting ideas, but at the end, the people, the characters, remained the same.

My wife and I recently finished the Hunger Games and we are selling them as soon as we can for two reasons. Too much gratuitous violence, and no one changes. Katniss is still Katniss, if maybe more broken, Peta is still Peta, Gale is still Gale, and Hamich is still District Twelve’s town drunk. Her second book was good, there was internal conflict, but not enough in my mind to save the series. My last post was about writing more with less. The Hunger Games could have been written as follows.

Book one: Kids kill kids for food or glory. Katniss and Peta defy the capital and both survive.

Book Two: Katniss loves two guys at the same time and justifies her actions.

Book Three: Practically everyone dies and Katniss chooses the one she can’t live without.

Another point of that my wife and I discussed was 50 Shades of Grey. Neither of us have the desire to read it, and frankly do not want that kind of literature in our home, but I am not sure which is worse: the fact that I can go to the local family friendly grocery store and pickup a porno in paperback form, or that it is a NYT best seller.

Perhaps my literary analysis skills are well below par, and perhaps I don’t know a good story when I see it, and perhaps readers have changed so that they don’t care about personal growth, development, rebirth, or anything that made stories memorable. But as I write, I make a challenge to authors, upcoming and experienced: make your stories about people and their internal struggles for rebirth. There is too much in the world about characters going through a gauntlet of trials, just to remain the same as they were in the beginning.